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Comic 563 - The DeKalb County Public Access Halloween Special, Page 20

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The DeKalb County Public Access Halloween Special, Page 20
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Author Notes:

16th Jan 2017, 12:00 AM
Heheh... More on Hazel, yeah. Always good to see more of the guy. ^^

A major idea on Glory is that she's a gambling addict, albiet a functioning one, hence why she's got the casino-themed costume. I think that came about by giving her a casino-costume first and then the idea she hangs out at casinos striving from that. Either way, think it's neat.

"Peachtree" is since that's kind of a weird thing for Atlanta; lot of streets and such are named after peaches. The only problem is that immediately after I got this back in color I realized I should've named that salon "PeachFUZZ Hair Studio." So friggin' obvious!

Makes sense that Glory is giving this advice. The idea with Power's henchmen is that they're all well-groomed and glamorous, like movie-stars (one cool part about Big and Rue's re-designs is that it brings that aspect out more). Imagine they know how to insist on style.

Huh. Just noticed how good that hat looks. Last scene with Hazel it seemed at times like it was floating. Looks good here.
16th Jan 2017, 12:01 AM
Martin F.
In general I kind of wanted to play Rue a little bit more fashion-savvy in the revamp, sort of overly pushy and conscious of it. Not a huge amount of focus given to it just this moment, but it does at least get a little bit of play here and serve into a lead in on another point.

Is this the first time Hazel's first name has popped up? I know his last has before from Xmarlek calling him by it, but I can't recall him ever having been said to be named Aiden before. Not a huge detail and it's not something to get used to calling him since he's still mostly going to be referred to as Hazel but still, interesting to note.

Not sure how much else I really have offhand. This page and the previous one do have their purposes o na few different notes but they're mostly a quick touch in with Hazel to advance a few lingering points before shifting the focus elsewhere in the party. As for the subject of Hazel's hair. . . We'll come back to that, though going back to the party in the next page. Won't be too hugely long getting back to Hazel.

Comments:

16th Jan 2017, 12:12 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.