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Comic 101 - Raynefall, Page 4

9th Sep 2011, 12:00 AM in 4. Raynefall
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9th Sep 2011, 12:00 AM
Martin F.
Where does one buy purple jeans, anyway?

Like how this page came out. Really, happy with the whole chapter so not much of an accomplishment I guess, but from a writing and artwork perspective I think it does its job well enough. Hopefully you readers agree.

Also, after the end of this chapter - which will be awhile - we're kicking around the idea of some one-off pages before the next one, primarily since it will be the longest chapter to date. If there's anyone in the cast you might want to see a page or two more with, feel free to let us know and we'll consider it.
9th Sep 2011, 4:20 AM
Adam C.
For the third panel, I actually looked up the logo and uniforms for the Atlanta Braves. Felt odd for me since I think I'm just about the only man in this entire state who's not a sports fan. Later on, when we meet Brian's kid brother Nick, he's wearing a lot of clothes in the Braves colors. Guess he can get him that stuff for free.

Anyway, good page. Not much to say about the extras or artwork myself besides being bothered by juts how short Lindsay's skirt is in the first panel. Shouldn't we be able to see her underwear at that length? I can't unsee it.