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Comic 1013 - Claim My Kingdom, Page 13

2nd May 2021, 11:00 PM in 27. Claim My Kingdom
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Author Notes:

2nd May 2021, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
This one's a weird one to comment on since it's a stark shift in direction for the chapter, but not entirely clear yet just what's happening. This whole sequence is something we've been looking forward to for a loooong time though so really hoping that everyone is going to enjoy what's in store from this point.

There were a few different changes in framing from the initial draft to the final product. Actually a fairly common thing; for WaR at a point we started a process of Adam sending me the outlines for the pages when they're first done, primarily with the purpose of kind of having some more input on how certain things are laid out and make sure things look like how I was picturing them on paper. Do think it helps a lot with making things more dynamic, though admittedly I would like to put more care into cutting down on negative space, I think that's fairly distracting in the second and third panels particularly here.

Yeah, in either case, since it's clearly leading into something bigger this is a difficult one for me to comment on, but do hope everyone enjoys what's to come as this chapter kicks into the next gear.

Adam had to head to bed early so here are his comments:

This is a bit of an odd one to comment on, and also really tired.... But yeah, this is one of those scenes you just dream about an dream about for a long time, and it's great to finally kick it off.

..... And yet I'm genuinely struggling to think of what to say.... There's so much that's just being set up here.... The other shoe just dropped but.... Yeah, you're gonna have to wait to see just how hard it's impact is gonna be. Because it's gonna be hard.

Had fun doing Hazel's mask-off expression in the fourth panel. Great "Oh, SHIT!" image. ^^

Comments:

2nd May 2021, 11:12 PM
Okay, what in the world is going to happen now.
6th May 2021, 9:47 PM
Martin F.
Hope you'll enjoy what's to come.