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Comic 12 - Stars on the Water, Page 12

4th Nov 2010, 5:00 PM in Prologue: Stars on the Water
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Stars on the Water, Page 12
Average Rating: 4 (2 votes)

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Author Notes:

4th Nov 2010, 5:00 PM
Adam C.
Not a lot to say about this one besides that while I like drawing John, I don't think he came out so good on this page. I did like the flame effects on his hands, though, or more specifically how they look after Martin colored them.

I do recall having to re-do Alex's expression in the last panel, though. He's supposed to look both sad and angry and having no clue how to pull that off, I wound up trying to mix them and his face wound up looking deadpan. When I sent it to Martin, I mentioned I might need to go back and re-do it, and he replied, ".... Yeah. Might wanna do that." ^^
6th Nov 2010, 2:37 AM
Martin F.
No, I don't know how the front thingies on Alex's hair (that's what they're called, thingies) got totally soaked while the back ones went untouched. Shut up.

Anyway, one bit of graffiti here's solely for design, another fits the whole foreshadowing thing I mentioned. Going to stop mentioning stuff like that now, but I mostly thought it bared bringing up in this case.

Comments:

6th Nov 2010, 11:36 AM
Leiko
John is awesome!!

Also, I made fan art, but wasn't sure who owned this, so I put Adam C. and Martin F. Is that correct or did I miss someone? Sorry if I did.