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Comic 281 - A Time For Work, Page 13

30th Jun 2013, 11:00 PM in 9. A Time For Work
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Author Notes:

30th Jun 2013, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
First of all - we'll be having a bonus update on Friday, and on Saturday for BP. Sorry about missing this month's but we'll have July's, no worries.

So this week, we're getting a double dose of O'Hara. Yeah, does sort of seem like she's really stepped into prominence quickly and might be kind of hijacking the plot a lot right now, I admit. The next good few pages are going to be mostly focused on her, though a couple of those rather indirectly so.

Also, I had to go back and edit this page as well as page 13 of Skeletons in the Closet. The number of days since the first chapter put that one on September 23rd, a Wednesday, while this page says that chapter happened on the 24th; it's pretty clear from reading that one (and moreso the BP one that went with it) that it was supposed to have been taking place on a Monday, so that needed to be fixed. Particularly given the specific date that chapter happened on is important later. So, yeah, chapter eight happened on the 21st, and sorry for needing to go back and edit that.

Pretty happy with this page, though. I liked getting to write O'Hara more in her own element than we've seen her so far, and I'm pretty pleased with how it came out. Hope our readers agree, and we'll see you on Friday!
30th Jun 2013, 11:34 PM
Adam C.
Feels weird commenting on this at such an unfamiliar place, but lemme see... ^^

I enjoyd this sequence, with the stage and the shots in the last two panels especially, the new recruits all lined up like that. Pretty easy picture to do given the headcount. Shit, I didn't notice how much nicer that robe looks compared to O'Hara's usual, though. Kinda distracting. ^^ No patches or stitching or anything.

Comments:

1st Jul 2013, 12:00 AM
O'Hara really has way of making everything spooky and her line about scratching and clawing her way from the grave, is she talking about how she's sick?
1st Jul 2013, 12:08 AM
Martin F.
Right; we'll be getting a bit further of a background on that in the next few pages.