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Comic 297 - A Time For Work, Page 29

29th Sep 2013, 11:00 PM in 9. A Time For Work
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29th Sep 2013, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Follow-up! Yeah, the last page of the chapter, which is coming up on Friday, will be sticking with this scene. Well, it will cut ahead a little bit, but same location and we'll be seeing Power again.

I tend to be pretty happy with Ms. Brooks, and this isn't an exception. I kind of picture her as being sort of aware of what sort of work she's wrapped up in but preferring not to think about, other than likely wondering quite often how she wound up involved in all of this.

I forget if I mentioned this, but initially there was going to be a good bit of running back and forth in the climax, with Alex's message to O'Hara being delivered by Bullet Time during a talk with Power, then there was going to be a scene with her reply back at the apartment complex. That wound up greatly simplified, which came with the nice perks of giving the Bullet Time fight a little more decisive of a conclusion, letting Alex and O'Hara directly interact, and giving Patricia some time to stretch her legs.

But yeah, be sure to swing back on Friday for the finish to the chapter! Hopefully everyone enjoys how it ends.
30th Sep 2013, 1:56 AM
Adam C.
Does McShay's haircut remind anyone else of Andy? Seriously, she looks like his aunt or something.

But yeah, say the sequence works very nicely here. Miss Brooks seems like a character that really took off just from being on the sidelines, sorta like Lenore in Blues. Strangely gets to show off a lot of personality in spite of being sorta on the sidelines.

Hadn't drawn Venice's lobby in like forever; actually didn't even have the font for that big sign behind Brooks anymore, so had to get Martin to send it to me.


30th Sep 2013, 2:14 AM
Poor Miss Brooks and all the things she has to deal with. Speaking of Alex and O'Hara directly interacting when she told Alex to wear a white dress was she talking about what's going to happen when Rin sees Starchild? Now that you pointed it out Adam, McShay's haircut is nearly identical to Andy's.
30th Sep 2013, 3:40 AM
Adam C.
Heh... Well, not quite identical. Andy's sorta sticks out like a horizontal pompadour.
30th Sep 2013, 7:57 AM
Martin F.
More or less, though it'll be awhile before they cross paths.