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Comic 303 - Quiet

24th Oct 2013, 11:00 PM in 10. Quiet
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24th Oct 2013, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Woo, chapter ten is here! Like I mentioned before, this chapter will largely be focused on Rin and Laura, though Alex still will be appearing throughout with pages centered around what he's doing. Still, the focus is largely on those two, and so they're the ones who get the cover spot. Similar to that, while O'Hara will be in this chapter she's largely absent from it.

This chapter went through a few different ideas. In the very, very early stages of things, and for a long while, it was called School Stories and actually jumped around between Alex's group of friends at school in various subplots with no regard for the main plot. I'll go into more details on that as we go, but we'll still be seeing plenty of the group and be getting a lot of stuff at the school. We're also going to meet the member of the Alex, Lillian, Laura, Robinsons, Nick, and Randy group that we haven't seen yet.

So, yeah, going to be a busy chapter is my point. I'm trying to manage it in a reasonable period of time though, trying to make it shorter than that last one. I doubt that's going to work, but rest assured, I'm going to try and make this one straight and to the point.

That being said, we'll be starting the chapter come Monday with Rin. Be sure to swing by!
25th Oct 2013, 12:41 AM
Adam C.
I really love simple pages like this, couldn't be any easier. Even with stuff like the shadow falling onto Rin's feet and the like. Idea for the page, in the script, is that they're looking for answers to their problems in the sky. Except worded better.

My own intention was for Laura to be wearing Dorothy's pink-star-shirt. The idea would be that they'd be thinking about the same person, except Rin would be thinking about Starchild and Laura about Dorothy. But I forgot about Laura's thing about wearing green. Shit, maybe that is one of Dorothy's pink shirts. Just every time Laura puts something on it turns that color.

Jack is in the character-box, and while I don't recall if he's in the scripts yet, I'm like 90% certain he's in this chapter just based on the dialog in a few pages I've already done.
25th Oct 2013, 1:26 AM
Martin F.
And Dorothy retaliates by using Sareena's power to change what color something is to make it pink again.

Yeah, decided I liked that idea more, so swapped it out. At least the pants are green so she's still wearing it.

Comments:

25th Oct 2013, 12:55 AM
So are we going to start seeing what those meds O'Hara slipped into his room are doing to Rin?
25th Oct 2013, 1:28 AM
Martin F.
Pretty much, yeah. Though it isn't so much about the pills she put there as it is the ones she took.