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Comic 341 - Red, White, and Blue, Page 2

11th May 2014, 11:00 PM in 11. Red, White, and Blue
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Author Notes:

11th May 2014, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
And latest in the "Embarrassing mistakes made by Adam" category, Alex isn't wearing his glasses! It's awkwardly explained away by him about to go out and do Starchild stuff, thus he already has his green-colored contacts in, but let's be honest; that was Martin covering my ass.

Not much else to say here. Lot of dialog so artwork was fairly light in terms of load. Especially since Dorothy I draw all the time and Sarabeth's design is simple. Martin, on the other hand, tried out a new way of detailing the hair to add a little "Umph" on top of the new shading style. Looks good, but it was fairly time-consuming for him. He's since perfected it.
11th May 2014, 11:27 PM
Adam C.
Here are Martin's comments:

Crossover! Crossover! Crossover!

Yeah, this page really beats you over the head with it, and it lays the groundwork for just what Alex's motivation heading something else come next week.

That won't be a big, constantly recurring thing throughout the chapter though, and we'll be moving on to it'll be taking a turn readers probably won't expect right away if anyone wants to speculate on that. Also, we're about to see her and Lillian interact a bit - not been too much of that in the comic to date unfortunately.

Actually, we won't even be seeing Alex again for around five more pages. The plot's focusing on Sarabeth for the next few, and into the crossover with Blue Blood Heroes is exactly.

Anyway, yeah. The first half of this chapter has way too much dialogue. Want to try and reign that in a bit, and the second half is generally less wordy. Lot of dialogue over the next few pages though.


Had some other stuff I wanted to say, but too time-consuming typing out everything I had planned on the cellphone I'm using for this.

Either way, I hope everyone enjoys. Mystery girl will be back next week.

Comments:

11th May 2014, 11:38 PM
Crossover yay can't wait can't wait this is going to be so cool. Alex and Grant will finally get to meet in person and Grant won't even realize he's meeting his hero, Alex is going to show the kids how the pros do their job.
18th May 2014, 11:54 PM
Adam C.
Yeah, looking forward to that. ^^
12th May 2014, 11:36 AM
So is Rayne going to be there as Dorothy, or as Rayne?
18th May 2014, 11:54 PM
Adam C.
As Dorothy, I'm afraid. ^^ Grant geeking out over meeting his idol will have to wait.