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14th Sep 2014, 11:00 PM in 11. Red, White, and Blue
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Author Notes:

14th Sep 2014, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
I struggled long and hard over how to portray this. For a long time, I pictured it as an extended flashback seeing as this chapter originally didn't have the framing it does, or just showing Tryton while Arc was talking about him, but I decided it worked better to have him just walking around and talking about it. We'll see Tryton eventually, don't you worry.

Anyway, yeah. A lot of dialogue in this page but it was sort of unavoidable. I do like how it came out at least, I always feel sort of nervous writing things like this or when Rin was talking about his parents but I'm happy with it.

Speaking of, yeah, we'll see Rin soon, early in on the next chapter. This one's very nearly done with, but not there yet.

Not sure what else I've got here, but I hope everyone enjoys. Know I'll have more to say on next week's page.
14th Sep 2014, 11:56 PM
Adam C.
Kinda just got up so bear with me a bit... ^^ What can I say on comments....

We started to make the cement toning more visible here, hopefully not to a distracting point, but it was barely visible how it was before. Not really a lot to say on the artwork given this is such a dialog-heavy page.

Am very fond of the page that follows this, though. Also, when I was drawing it, me and Martin were really surprised at how many pages this scene had in it.


15th Sep 2014, 12:06 AM
You spelled Levine wrong in the first panel. So Arc is an acronym? very interesting.
15th Sep 2014, 12:09 PM
Martin F.
Thanks for letting us know, been fixed now.