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Comic 363 - Red, White, and Blue, Page 23

5th Oct 2014, 11:00 PM in 11. Red, White, and Blue
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5th Oct 2014, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
This is the last we see our mystery girl and Sarabeth in this chapter, though Sarabeth still plays into the next couple of pages. Three more left to go.

Ugh, my focus is in several different places right now. Going to have to reunlock everything in Smash Bros. because my file became corrupted somehow, and I'm watching a really boring PPV right now while at it. Whatever, will try to focus on the page.

So yeah, we're getting details about something with variable terms for it, and a mention of the Harenas. If you've been reading BP you've seen one of those in action already, but them as they work aren't really important to that element of WaR's plot.

That dialogue in the first panel should explain a lot about the situation, and set up at least one more mystery for the future. We'll come back to that one, the where to go for information thing.

Speaking of, it won't be too long before we see this girl again. She'll be showing up in a page we'll be running between this chapter and the next one.
5th Oct 2014, 11:33 PM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, end of Mystery-woman. I'm not too bothered by it; her pages were easy, but I'm afraid they were too much of an excuse to be lazy. I've felt the last few pages we've done I've had too many of those. Not something I'm trying to encourage; always we're trying to push on and improve the art however we can.

Not much to say about the page otherwise, though did get a bit more dynamic with the poses here. Admittedly, only because they were called for in the script. The second, third and fourth ones are pretty striking, so fond of out they came out.

Don't worry, you'll find out who this lady is soon. Do hope you'll enjoy it when you do. ^^
7th Oct 2014, 1:20 AM
Martin F.
Oh, right, everyone - Friday is the fourth anniversary of WaR! We'll have a preview of the fifth year to go with it.


5th Oct 2014, 11:44 PM
Okay very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.
10th Oct 2014, 8:42 AM
Martin F.
Hope you'll enjoy learning more. BP'll be touching on this a bit soon.