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Comic 390 - Sound Alive, Page 17

23rd Mar 2015, 12:00 AM in 12. Sound Alive
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Author Notes:

23rd Mar 2015, 12:00 AM
Adam C.
I kinda like how McShay's such a behemoth that her power is sorta inconsequential or at the very least just a buffer for her physical toughness. I dunno, the fight's really just getting into the swing of it, so maybe as things go on and get more dragged out we'll see some bigger use of her ability. Maybe she'll do something like cause the building to collapse. ^^

Again, I was very pleased with the artwork on this. ^^ I loved McShay's jump into the air. When I went this to Martin for coloring, I actually included an extra-large speech bubble with "McSHAY SMASH!" in it, though sadly had to remove it for the page itself.

The script called for a pretty gruesome impact, like a sort of "Nnng... She's going to the hospital" moment, so hope I delivered. ^^
23rd Mar 2015, 12:29 AM
Martin F.
Yeah, pretty happy with this one. Not sure how much I've got to say about it offhand though, just waking up and not really got my head on straight yet.

Will say did want the last few panels structured a little bit differently, with Alex more being on the ground and pulling O'Hara in the way out of desperation than anything then Cynthia tackling her while remaining standing instead of jumping, but no huge deal there. Hope everyone enjoys.


23rd Mar 2015, 12:38 AM
The brutality, this fight is a complete bloodbath.
23rd Mar 2015, 12:30 PM
Martin F.
Heh, hopefully one you're enjoying.