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Comic 418 - Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 3

30th Aug 2015, 11:00 PM in 13. Shopping Star, Burning Bright
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30th Aug 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
That is some bad bubble-placement in the first panel. Sometimes the layout of the panel and where the characters are standing just means I don't have much I can do. Which is a flimsy excuse seeing as I'm almost entirely in charge of both those things most of the time.

Huh. The arms on Fulton's costume are really inconsistent. I might have to tweak that right quick, one second.


There, fixed. Now let's see what I have to say about this page besides nitpicks...

Huh. Nitpicks is recognized as a word by Firefox. Anyway, yeah, really like Paxton. As you can see he's kinda-sorta designed for stealing the show here. Really have been enjoying him, especially the unpredictability and how he switches back and forth from friendly and dangerous. ^^

Ironic gimmick is... Hm... No, won't go into the gender thing now, that's enough comment. Will save it for a page I can't say jack about.
30th Aug 2015, 11:14 PM
Martin F.
Not sure what I have to say about this one myself, though happy with it. Getting into the action nice and early in this one, though not quite as early as it seems like as the next page is cutting away.

Do quite like Ana's reactions to things, though. Really in general think I'm starting to get a good handle on how to really play her off the others and what her role is, which is good I guess since this chapter's somewhat of an increase in prominence for her compared to the last one.

Think that's really all I've got, but hopefully everybody enjoys and we'll see you on Friday!


30th Aug 2015, 11:24 PM
This is getting interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.
3rd Sep 2015, 5:49 PM
Martin F.
Hope you'll enjoy.