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Comic 431 - Shopping Star, Burning Bright, Page 15

11th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM in 13. Shopping Star, Burning Bright
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11th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Christ, I gotta pick up on the pages... Eh. Still enjoying this chapter a fair deal. Wish there was more stuff in this store given we're cutting away from it soon.

Blues reference, though! ^^ I guess. I mean, I dunno how that plays through. Xandy is sort of like a WaR character who mostly appears in Blues.

Was something about Alex here I actually did question Martin about since it was nagging at me, but he gave me an answer I found really satisfying. Can't say more since that's coming up later in-story.

Also like how when Lillian brings up a magical-girl anime there's a Sailor Moon-ish costume showing up behind Alex.
12th Oct 2015, 3:52 AM
Martin F.
Commenting directly after getting out of bed, so probably going to be an awkward, unfocused mess here.

Pretty straightforward page really but like how it came out. Is the last we'll be in this store, kind of a shame since I've quite enjoyed the stuff in it and would like to do more on that front, but isn't the last of this leg of the plot. Will be cutting away back to the fight next page though.

Yeah, outside of that I'm kind of coming up blank. I am rather happy with the page though, if only because I think I'm getting better at making dialogue more compact. Granted, there are a couple of pages coming up I'm kind of iffy on on that front so... Yeah, we'll see I guess.

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12th Oct 2015, 2:12 PM
Alex heard his first hint towards the Stargirl anime, wonder what's going to happen next.