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Comic 433 - Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 17

18th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM in 13. Shopping Star, Burning Bright
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Author Notes:

18th Oct 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Brain feels like a pancake... Can't think straight... Nnnnng.... Really like Ozais' twirling and Paxton in general here, not sure what else to say. ^^

Paxton and Ozais are generally the funnest two characters to draw in this particular arc of the plot. Don't mind seeing more of the two of 'em.

Had to re-draw Fulton in the first and second panels.... Is a weird thing on that, but again, can't think straight so will leave it up to you guys to decide why.
18th Oct 2015, 11:16 PM
Martin F.
Not sure what all I've got to say here myself. Fairly self-explanatory page really.

Actually in general this whole ballroom fight's not been giving me too much to comment on. Kind of weird, but sometimes you get a scene like that I guess.

Really liking the stuff with Paxton at least. He's a character who I've been figuring would be fun to write for and thus far he's proving me right.


18th Oct 2015, 11:30 PM
So many things happening at once, and in the fifth panel, Ozais says milday, that doesn't sound right.
22nd Oct 2015, 7:47 PM
Martin F.
Yeah, typo, will get that later. Thanks for the heads-up.