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Comic 453 - Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 36

27th Dec 2015, 11:00 PM in 13. Shopping Star, Burning Bright
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27th Dec 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
"I'm bored. Reveal to me your panties!"

Yeah, really like this page quite a bit. Totally love Paxton's pick-up line, and Ana's spontaneous underwear seeking is just great. We'll get into this more on Friday, specifically that one aspect. ^^ Nothing else much to say.
27th Dec 2015, 11:03 PM
Martin F.
Yeah, this is one of those pages where the last panel really speaks for itself. We'll be getting some answers on what exactly is going on with that in the next page, but only in a way that's going to raise further questions.

One thing I do quite like about the page is the animated approach Adam took to Ana's demon form here, making the annoyed expressions really wacky and exaggerated. Think it's a pretty good fit that helps with making her pop a little bit more.

Last page of the chapter for the Patriot Initiative and Jake, incidentally. Neither's showing up in the next chapter - that one's focus will be rather tight - but both are rather likely for chapter fifteen. And though it'll be a little bit, we will be following through on this date subject, don't you worry.

Speaking of, might as well get to hyping the next chapter up. We have three more pages left in the chapter after this one, then a brief filler arc focused on Alex, Laura, and Lillian back at the apartment. Following that we'll be finally getting the Ivy League showdown in chapter fourteen - Like the Rain, They Fall.


27th Dec 2015, 11:05 PM
List of things for her to say:

"Aha! she IS wearing wonder woman panties!"

"huh..So you always go comando?"

"thought I smelled baby powder.."
31st Dec 2015, 9:31 AM
Martin F.
Heh, maybe one of those will end up being her thought process, stick around to see.
27th Dec 2015, 11:09 PM
This is certainly an interesting page, looking forward to the next one.
31st Dec 2015, 9:31 AM
Martin F.
Hoping you'll like what's coming up.