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Comic 518 - Storms Are Brewing- Page 17

11th Aug 2016, 11:00 PM in 15. Storms Are Brewing
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Author Notes:

11th Aug 2016, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Gaaaah, really scatterbrained doing this one. Lemme see what I got to say.... Is nice touching back on Candice for a bit. ^^ I do like this idea that most people at her birthday party are just people her adoptive-mother knows from work, not any actual friends her own age.

Also see that the bad mood is a pretty universal thing today. Odd, isn't it? ^^

John's "fry off more than just his finger" line is mentioning that Callous is missing a finger on his left hand. You can't see it in this page, but it's pretty obvious in the next one.
11th Aug 2016, 11:28 PM
Martin F.
Just a brief bit of checking in with Candice and seeing a little more from her perspective. We'll revisit her more in detail later, don't worry.

For now though, Section 24! I wanted to include them in this chapter pretty much from the word go, but it took awhile to come up with exactly how to work them into it. Think this route works well and leads to some good stuff with the lot of them, and I was able to play it a bit into some stuff coming down the line too which is always a plus.

Funny, dialogue keeps getting dropped with Section 24 members due to external factors. There was Ellen back in the prologue and a bit of miscommunication on this page resulted in Gaspeed losing the dialogue he had. He gets a decent bit in the next page and is supposed to be kind of a quiet sort anyway, so no huge loss really.

One other thing that bares mentioning, Adam's pointed out to me before that contrary to how I kind of had him talked about Callous didn't seem all that hard to work with. As such was wanting to play up the abrasiveness a bit through this sequence, do more to really get over that the guy's a dick.


12th Aug 2016, 1:45 PM
Everybody's having a bad day so everyone's in a bad mood, wonder what's going to happen next.