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Comic 528 - Storms Are Brewing- Page 27

15th Sep 2016, 11:00 PM in 15. Storms Are Brewing
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Author Notes:

15th Sep 2016, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
This is kinda what I meant last update; it's just the two characters talking, same as last time, only now tried to punch it up. Last time there was too much shot/reverse-shot boredom, here I threw in some slightly more interesting angles and body language. .... Honestly, kinda afraid I went too far with making Sareena all spunky. She's bouncing her hips so much she looks like a hula-girl. I dunno, I'd be lying if I said I didn't think it was really cute... And I do like how it contrasts White Noise being totally still and motionless.

Threw in the stuff with the curtain too; just to make White Noise look mysterious. In general just really like to keep her as mysterious and creepy as possible. Hence the close-up on her eyes. ^^

Huh. I just notice that White Noise refers to Alex as "She". Even though she apparently knows who he really is. That seems weirdly dickish, honestly.

Anybody else notice White Noise's eyes are shaped like lemons?
15th Sep 2016, 11:21 PM
Martin F.
Yeah, White Noise referring to Alex by female pronouns is a conscious choice in writing it. There are reasons for it but will go into those another time.

Not sure how much I've got to say on this one offhand, kind of is what it is and think Adam did a good bit to sum it up. Still, do like how it came out. This'll probably be the last we see of White Noise for a little bit incidentally.

One more page left in this sequence. Kind of a big one, brings a few things together and lays some groundwork for some stuff n the future. Be sure to swing by, then after that page we'll get to the one before last story which is tied with this one as the longest, centered on Misty and Ana.


15th Sep 2016, 11:33 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.