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Comic 632 - A Man And A Woman- Page 17

14th Sep 2017, 11:00 PM in 17. A Man and a Woman
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Author Notes:

14th Sep 2017, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Funny thing; the script called for Paxton to put his hand on Anna, but because in the previous page I had done this weird Citizen Kane thing with the long-ass table, that meant the only way he could do so was to drag his chair over to her. Weird accidental touch I liked. It felt in-character that Paxton at some point just had to fuck around with the table settings or do SOMETHING to upset the establishment of the high-class place. This let him do that without wrecking his date.

But yeah, when you take in that Anna's life has gotten fucked up very quickly, I really loved this mini-breakdown Martin wrote up. It felt both very realistic and very intimate. It gave them a chance to really make an emotional connection. Probably a case where breaking down sobbing is the best thing to happen on your date.
14th Sep 2017, 11:44 PM
Martin F.
In the script I didn't really mean for Ana to be crying here, more just being kind of panicky. Do think this direction works though, since she does certainly have reason to - life's gone through all kinds of crazy shake-ups for her lately and this really is something of a culmination of all this weird new stuff coming at her on a personal level.

Not sure what else I've really got to say on this one offhand but yeah, rather happy with it. Probably have more to say next time but if nothing else I do like getting to start taking Paxton in a little more down-to-earth of a direction here though again, more to say on that next time.


15th Sep 2017, 12:28 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.