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Comic 636 - A Man And A Woman- Page 21

28th Sep 2017, 11:00 PM in 17. A Man and a Woman
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Author Notes:

28th Sep 2017, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heheheh. That move in panel four is a magically-empowered Mongolian Chop. I actually kinda love when Martin's script directions include things that need to be explained via GIFs and Youtube clips. ^^

I also liked doing Cassidy and DeGroot's little quiet talk in the second panel. Imagine DeGroot tries to cultivate the loving older gentleman and doesn't like the idea of having a PR discussion outside of closed doors, hence the coffee mug in front of his face.

But... Yeah. Sudden turn-around. ^^ Do we do those too much? Feels like I can think of a decent amount in both comics.
29th Sep 2017, 4:22 PM
Martin F.
Yeah, does kind of feel like we maybe overuse that a little bit. Something I might need to watch out for for a little bit.

Do like how this page came out though. Think pretty handily conveys the point I was getting at with the fight structure - that Atlanta isn't particularly bright but he's durable and hits like a truck.

Also like getting to have Cassidy immediately start trash-talking Atlanta given the chance. I get the sense while he's clearly one of the leading members of the group anyway it isn't quite enough for him.


29th Sep 2017, 8:59 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.