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Comic 641 - A Man and a Woman, Page 25

12th Oct 2017, 11:00 PM in 17. A Man and a Woman
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12th Oct 2017, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Funny, last page I said I'd have more things to say on all this Chris stuff on this one, but it turns out most of the points I really want to address on it are actually in the NEXT page. So there will probably be where I'll likely go into some real detail on the hows and whys of that as well as some of the original intentions with the idea.

Still, one thing that should be kind of clear here is that the idea with Chris is specifically that it's an outlet for Laura to act differently from normal, not something about looking for dates or a transgender matter. We'll get more insight into that next time but both were matters kind of mulled over in regards to how to play the Chris matter.

I do think now would be a good time to say at least that the original intention was for this whole thing to come out a LOT later than it's doing. That idea was overhauled quite awhile ago for a mix of reasons - plausibility, how long I felt like I could keep the idea going, the implications it has on Laura's character being better to explore now than down the line (I say when she's not even in the next chapter...), the potential implications of it coming out Alex has been hanging out with a fake person for months instead of just an evening...

I know the, "It'd be breaking character," thing sounds pretty shaky but we'll get more insight into that whole thought process next page. Yeah, I know, got a lot of that to say on this one. The next page is going to have a TON to talk about.

And here are Adam's comments, he's having some Internet issues right now.

The internet is down at my house. I am now sitting at McDonalds leeching Wi-Fi and hating myself longer and longer as I do it. I'm sitting between a big-screen TV playing the news and a large family so a little scatterbrained trying to type this.

Really wanted this page to look Romantic. Like I said with the reveal page; I loved doing a chapter about Alex and Ropun on a date and connecting since I love this paring. Put time into throwing in all the stars and the secluded look. Want it to look like they can connect perfectly. ^^Just look at how sweet this all is.

And it figures I actually don't have much to say on this now that I'm actually commenting.... I remember I was finishing this off just before I saw the My Little Pony movie and was late because I was taking the time to add all those stars. ^^ What's awesome is the setting gets MORE romantic as this goes!


12th Oct 2017, 11:08 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.