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Comic 678 - Filler: Meeting Edward

19th Feb 2018, 12:00 AM in Filler
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Filler: Meeting Edward
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19th Feb 2018, 12:00 AM
Adam C.
I think the implied punchline with this is that Ana probably knocked Edward unconscious and was stuck as a five-year-old until he woke back up.

Really, this is a pretty dickish way to greet someone your sister's brought home to meet you. I can kinda see why Ana would turn against him immediately for it. Jesus, imagine if Ana met Anne from the Wotch. She'd get five pages before ripping out her heart and eating it.

Actually, when you think of it, it's amazing the list of people Ana's demon half destroyed wasn't like twice the length. Maybe it's the fact that I had a rough day at work that I'm saying that. Right now the idea of a sociopathic second-half who unleashes limitless, undetectable vengeance on anyone who wrongs you but leaves you technically with a free conscience seems like the greatest super-power ever.
19th Feb 2018, 12:01 AM
Martin F.
Quite an improvement from the last time we did this scene -

theblackprincess.thecomicseries.com/comics/8

One plus side about having this page delayed the last time we were going to do it is it gave a little more time to sink time into it compared to the usual filler - had a working script Adam did at that point but I rewrote it for this. More or less the same, really just some different dialogue and a slightly different payoff.

I was actually kind of hoping I could come up with something better to do with that last panel payoff to be honest. Sort of just for the necessity of the visual it had to be something that was basically a normal pers and really making her older, making her younger, or making her a guy were really the only options. Started to go with the guy thing but I decided the gag worked best with it being a form that'd in theory be weaker and look less menacing. That form aside everything here was up to Adam's discretion incidentally, I pretty much just told him go with whatever it was he wanted to draw.

Not entirely certain what the next filler's going to be, need to get to figuring that out. First though need to buckle down on Blues - presently no pages sitting finished colored so... Yeah. Gotta get to that.

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19th Feb 2018, 12:09 AM
Edward makes a really bad first impression, wonder when they're going to show up in the currant Blues chapter.