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Comic 698 - Star Night- Page 15

29th Apr 2018, 11:00 PM in 19. Star Night
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29th Apr 2018, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
There we go. The evil plan. The thing our villain wants to do and what our heroes have to stop. An underappreciated but very important moment to a high-stakes chapter.

Honestly, I think this is by far the best evil-plan-reveal we've ever had. Mostly the reason the hero has to stop the bad guy is pretty self-explanatory. There's never a need for a long-winded explanation. But I totally love this set-up. There's so much clear implied suffering coming, it's perfectly set-up with O'Hara's tech and mentality, and even thematically matches the earlier chapter about rain that makes you depressed. It's a great hook for a big superhero plot.

Nothing else I wanna say but I'm almost jealous of how high-stakes this is and what a good set-up we have. It really fits for how much O'Hara has been built up as a threat to have the risk and danger be as great as this. I think the closest we've ever had is when Insomniac was mentally attacking Stonewall.
29th Apr 2018, 11:09 PM
Martin F.
So... Yeah. That's what O'Hara is planning.

This whole part was kind of awkward to write but definitely enjoyed doing it. Kind of had fun with the bouncing back and forth explanation thing - nice little way to spice up the visuals a little and get a little bit of personal charm in with conveying the information.

That said... Yeah, things aren't exactly looking great here. Alex has been reduced to his underwear, is being told to fight McShay again when it didn't go so well last time, and O'Hara's just laid out exactly what her plan is and just how much potential destruction is going to come out of it. Things don't exactly look good right now.

Speaking of, something I enjoyed getting to highlight in this is Patricia's more depraved side. Been trying to put that over the past couple chapters and show she's pretty messed up in the head in her own right.

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29th Apr 2018, 11:36 PM
While I'm sure this is far from the first time Alex has been in a situation like this, this is still extremely bad, what in the world is going to happen now.