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Comic 762 - Loving Family, Page 6

6th Dec 2018, 11:00 PM in 21. Loving Family
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Author Notes:

6th Dec 2018, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Whew..... Okay, got the new chair, new monitor, new computer. This feels... Good. Really, really good. ^^ Love you folks out there who are gracious enough to read our comics. This situation just makes me really appreciate how much I have. And doing the dialog on this page made me appreciate how much the Patriot Initiative are fucking dicks.

Just... Wow. You can really tell from the posturing however much they may care about stopping this, they're definitely invested in using the heroism as a way to bolster their image and appear more legitimate so they can push their agenda. It's actually kinda despicable in a way that didn't quite occur to me until I put the dialog to the page how much they're willing to use this for their own ends.

By contrast, Ella is at least genuinely interested in helping people, and her feeble attempts at posturing are just trying to be on the same footing as the other two groups. Granted, the implication is that the other members of her organization couldn't even PRETEND to care, but at least SHE legitimately wants to stop the disappearances.

Speaking of, that last bit of her standing up alongside Sareena and Misty was an ad-lib in drawing. So was her trying to get in the "last word" of the meeting. Very fitting. ^^
6th Dec 2018, 11:24 PM
Martin F.
Pretty happy with this one, think it puts over a lot of aspects of the various characters involved - between Misty being less confrontational and more able to negotiate than Sareena is, Ella's bad attempts at being professional, the Patriot Initiative being dicks with DeGroot trying to look like slightly less of one by comparison... Pretty happy with it.

Next page is back to Laura's house. For the moment this is the last page I've scripted that actually has Ella and the Patriot Initiative in it; they'll be back in the chapter later certainly, just in the moment I'm not entirely certain how much so. It won't take all that long to get around to Sareena and Misty though.

That's all I've really got but hopefully everyone enjoys this one!


6th Dec 2018, 11:45 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.