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Comic 770 - Loving Family, Page 14

4th Jan 2019, 12:00 AM in 21. Loving Family
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Loving Family, Page 14
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Author Notes:

4th Jan 2019, 12:00 AM
Adam C.
Talking on the phone and realllly scatterbrained. Comment later, folks. Enjoy Ropun and Ropun-Mom. ^^
4th Jan 2019, 12:16 AM
Martin F.
Is this coming off as overly sappy? It's not really meant to be that so much but I feel like that one panel might be kind of overdoing it. Though I do still rather like how it came out.

Honestly around here is when I kind of realized this chapter was starting to get away from me a bit and end up longer than I had planned - I kind of wasn't really sure that either concept could sustain a chapter on its own and now kind of feels like both are starting to strain for time. There is a certain stepping on the gas in a couple of pages as a result of that but just hoping it doesn't make for too awkward or dragging of a read.

Funny I'm saying all of this now when I actually think this page came out pretty good, but it's not the easiest one in the world to comment on. Eh.
4th Jan 2019, 2:10 AM
Adam C.
Martin just told me to do whatever for that one panel so just drew a bunch of cute pictures of Ropun and her Mama through the years. Yeah, it is a little sappy but I don't care. I'm a sucker for this sorta thing. I mean.... Tiny-Ropun-Gangster is just so cute. ^^

I really like the punchline on Sareena in the last panel too. Funny thing being that I drew that last panel wrong and had to go back and re-do the background. Also the random cashier in the background I think is Osaka frm Azumanga Daioh. Not entirely sure how that happened.

Given Ropun never wears skirts unless she's in-character, think she might feel awkward about her Mom apparently suggesting the kilt to her.

Comments:

4th Jan 2019, 3:07 AM
In the last panel Sareena and Misty both have that look that seems to say just kill me now, wonder what's going to happen next.