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Comic 771 - Loving Family, Page 15

6th Jan 2019, 11:00 PM in 21. Loving Family
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6th Jan 2019, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heh. Got a lot going on, will comment later. ^^
6th Jan 2019, 11:25 PM
Martin F.
Pretty happy with this page but it kind of is just setup, both for where the Sareena and Misty plot is going and for an aspect of the next chapter. Kind of makes it difficult to comment on given that though.

Guess one thing that does bare mentioning is that this was originally going to segue off into Laura's dad directly showing up soon after this; he probably will later on in the chapter, but around this point is when the decision was made to really slam on the gas with the other plot; after the next page we'll just be with it for awhile.

Still, yeah, not easy to comment on but hopefully everyone's enjoying this one. And rather curious if anyone has any guesses as to who this friend of Alex's might be.

Oh, actually, one more aspect to comment on is the stray detail that McShay's now the manager of the gym. That was basically just something I decided on while writing this page; I was wanting to start seeing it more regularly from here on with her being a regular background fixture of it, figured might as well go ahead and throw in a detail like that while at it since it'd certainly help Alex with running the place and give her a little more to do when there. I assume she probably has a lot of money put back so this is a job she got more for the convenience and to keep her busy than anything.
7th Jan 2019, 12:20 AM
Adam C.
Gaaaaah, I dunno how to comment on this one... One of those weird ones where I both have too much AND too little to say about this. But REALLY like the diea of Alex's gym being a weird sort of hub/meet-up place for our heroes to set plans and unwind in. The mundane version of the Danger Room. Really regreat the kids never had a place like that in Blues, maybe could try to introduce something like that now that the comic's being shaken up, just dunno what it'd be.

Huh. Go through this whole chapter without ever forgetting the snowman on Lillian's sweater. Would've bet against that.


7th Jan 2019, 1:54 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.