This script kind of came together all at once; didn't really even know after the last page if I wanted to follow up on it or turn back to the other plot, but then hit on that pun idea (probably thanks to coming off of playing through Persona 5) and the whole page basically clicked together in my mind in the process.
Last page with this plot for a bit as next page starts the move into the main action of the chapter. Kind of wound up underestimating how much time both of these plots could take up in their own right; I feel like if I were to do it again I'd have made these separate chapters despite the uniting family aspect.
That's all I've got but hopefully everyone enjoys.