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Comic 782 - Loving Family, Page 26

14th Feb 2019, 11:00 PM in 21. Loving Family
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Author Notes:

14th Feb 2019, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heheh.... Bit distracted, but placeholder comments for now. ^^
14th Feb 2019, 11:42 PM
Martin F.
This whole thing was a little awkward to write in that I kind of wanted to have Misty incapicated a little longer than this but at the same time, wanted to put over that at the end of the day... Megan and Everett really don't especially know what they're doing while Misty most certainly does.

It's not really said in the chapter I don't think, but I get the sense what happened with the two of them beginning all of this is probably that they caught Gold Rush offguard - likely through use of Megan's ability to not be noticed - and he has done a lot of the heavy-lifting for the group since. Essentially lucky amateurs who have just barely been sticking under the radar; I was kind of trying to put that over in the filler pages building this chapter up, where Everett was complaining about Megan trying to tell him to be more restrained and slow about all of this.

There is one key aspect of the two I really want to talk about that is on display here, but probably better suited for a little later in the chapter at a more opportune moment. Either way, on the whole pretty happy with this one.
15th Feb 2019, 1:16 AM
Adam C.
Yeah, again, Everett and Megan aren't in the chapter much but certainly leave an impression. ^^ I especially liked doing Megan's meek and terrified body language when Everett starts yelling at her. That probably explains a bit of why she murdered her folks.

Likewise, really dug the idea of Everett being okay with having abusive parents on the logic that if things got bad enough he could mind-control them. And the anger over Megan's lack of faith almost made him feel like a sick, twisted mirror of the underestimated Blues kids.

All I got. Hope you folks enjoy. ^^

Comments:

15th Feb 2019, 1:42 AM
This situation is a lot of weird and crazy things, wonder what's going to happen next.