Stars on the Water, Page 8

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Adam C.
26th Oct 2010, 5:00 PM

At least the art on this is a step up.... The way their legs look is still pretty bad, but the page layout I think came out pretty good. And I do like the way all the characters look. This is the first strip I can look at and not wince in the comic, which is a good sign.

As a side note, Misty having a black eye and Carla getting a bloody nose weren't in the script. I just kinda wound up putting those in where appropriate to show they were hurt when hit....

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Lizuka
2nd Nov 2010, 4:11 PM

I kind of like how Misty looks in particular with this one. Got a good handle on her, and the black eye is just displeasing enough to look at.

I think Carla's the first person directly referred to by name in the comic incidentally. Don't hold me to that, but I think she is.

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