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Comic 823 - Into The Blue, Page 20

7th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM in 22. Into the Blue
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Into The Blue, Page 20
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Author Notes:

7th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heheh.... Yeah, page was a lot of fun. ^^ I love seeing Alex as the cool teacher trying to pass on instruction for this. Was both fun to read and to draw him tapping at her while she peeks out shyly from behind the gloves.

We mentioned that we're trying various little tweaks to the art, one we've been dabbling in has been water effects. Ellen pouring water over John wasn't in the script but thought it was a fun, cute little gag for them, so threw it in. And mostly it was so we'd have an excuse to play with water.

Of course more of Grant too. ^^ Interacting cutely with Daryll and Mad Hops; again, good show of him as the adorable superhero fanboy.
7th Jul 2019, 11:49 PM
Martin F.
Ugh, lot less up to talk about this than I would've been ten minutes ago, sudden irritating shit on my end.

Either way though, am happy with this one. Do feel like this chapter's struggled a little with feeling big enough in scope in terms of the people there - in particular while I've kind of started to write some things a couple of times I haven't really been able to find anything for the Robinsons to actually do of consequence - but think this page is a good step forward on that front.

I tend to particularly like how Daryl's coming out throughout all this. Feel like he's pretty quickly been established as very expressive and outgoing.

Comments:

7th Jul 2019, 11:10 PM
Is it just me or does miss black have a stick up her butt today.
7th Jul 2019, 11:33 PM
Martin F.
I think it's kind of just been the art coming out that way, isn't really intended to be. Think she's more just kind of out of her depth with this whole training thing.
8th Jul 2019, 4:01 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.