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Comic 824 - Into The Blue, Page 21

11th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM in 22. Into the Blue
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Into The Blue, Page 21
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Author Notes:

11th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heh. Really tired, but hope you folks enjoy this page. ^^ Talk to ya tonight~
11th Jul 2019, 11:04 PM
Martin F.
This page probably would've had a bit more visually going on with it but was kind of written in the midst of us not really having a backlog when we were having to do the filler due to other things going on - as such wound up having some fat trimmed from it in the name of time, though don't think we really lost anything essential.

Jack's stuff here is kind of a nod to having at a point considered having the followup to the Ana training being him and Alex having a brief fight. I ultimately decided it was superfluous, especially since I wanted to keep the chapter from coming out too long, but I did still want Jack to pop up and to lay some groundwork for it. Might come back to it as a throwaway thing within a few chapters of now since I really want the gym to be kind of the general base of operations for Alex going forward.

So yeah, next page we're into Ivy vs. Grant. I finished writing the rest of the chapter a couple days ago and this sequence makes up the bulk of what's left - tricky to write at points but we're both really happy with how it reads on paper so hoping that people are going to enjoy it.
12th Jul 2019, 12:39 AM
Adam C.
While the chapter's length does need to be watched, I do like the idea of a Jack vs. Alex fight. ^^ Mostly because Jack is a fun character, and despite being a snooty rich kid in terms of characterization, he's got a savage edge and is clearly ripped as fuck.

Ivy and Grant's fight is something I'm looking forward to, though. ^^ Read the whole thing yesterday since those scripts were all written, and the fight was really enjoyable, with a few aspects of both I wanted to see in practice.

In the meantime, still enjoying Alex and Ana together. Loving and helpful teacher-Alex is still fun, and I like the gag of Ana not knowing how to get her gloves off. ^^

Comments:

12th Jul 2019, 1:14 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.