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Comic 845 - Blue Cold, Page 3

22nd Sep 2019, 11:00 PM in 23. Blue Cold
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Blue Cold, Page 3
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22nd Sep 2019, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
So it's been a few pages, how are people liking the smaller page size? Think it's been a pretty smooth transition myself - if anything could probably safely go a little smaller - but if anyone has any issues with the text or anything from it don't hesitate to let us know.

I've been pretty eager to get to this page since I wrote it. Some good variety of images with the flashbacks here, it's good to see Megan and Everett again for a moment, and I like getting to see some shots of a slightly younger Daryl before and just after transitioning, to the point that I'm sort of wondering about doing short-haired Daryl as a full-time thing at some point since I like how that shot came out. Seeing Sonia in-costume is also pretty cool, given only previous time it's come up was Everett's drawing of her.

The bit with Christina brushing Grant's hair was basically thrown in entirely because Adam said he wanted to see it; he tossed the idea out there and I pretty quickly came up with a way on how to work it in. That's why it's pretty disconnected from the rest of the page, but still think it's a cute moment. Didn't want to spend too much time on it since I'm wanting to get into the action very quickly in this chapter, but did want to do at least a little more character-building first.
23rd Sep 2019, 12:01 AM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, there's a lot of good stuff in this page; in particular was cool seeing Everett and Megan again. I especially loved drawing Everett as bawling his eyes out in that picture; given what little we know about his home life being... troublesome before deciding to find a family of his own, it was cool to throw some hints to how that might've come about. ^^ Seeing Darryl before transitioning was really cool too.

Like Martin said, Christina brushing Grant's hair was my idea; just felt like something really cute and sweet I could see her doing for him. ^^

I'm starting to actually get used to the head-dialog thing. Mostly since I've started actually taking into account at the start of a page and not being waylaid at the finish line like before. ^^

Comments:

23rd Sep 2019, 12:10 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.