Oh. Great. I just make a speech about how I thought the art got better from here on out and we come to this.
It uh... Took some time before I learned how to draw in side-profile, hence why Alex looks so weird in the third panel. But that's nothing compared to that weird tendril, which is supposed to be a pillar of water slapping him across the face. Martin's colors fortunately took the edge off that.
Speaking of, Gaspeed's speech bubble and that little mini-panel weren't going to be in it originally, but I was just too crappy an artist to convey that Alex was faking Gaspeed out without it.
Yeah, originall was going to try and totally keep out showing people's thoughts in WaR, though it's not too big of a loss having to do it here.
Not a whole lot else to say about this page, though. Not one of my favorites and there's not a whole lot going on, but it gets its job done well enough. Might as well make a note, though, that graffiti is something to keep an eye on from here. One page that will be up in a few weeks in particular has a few things worth watching for on the walls.
It uh... Took some time before I learned how to draw in side-profile, hence why Alex looks so weird in the third panel. But that's nothing compared to that weird tendril, which is supposed to be a pillar of water slapping him across the face. Martin's colors fortunately took the edge off that.
Speaking of, Gaspeed's speech bubble and that little mini-panel weren't going to be in it originally, but I was just too crappy an artist to convey that Alex was faking Gaspeed out without it.