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Comic 966 - Not Christmas Without You, Page 13

19th Nov 2020, 11:00 PM in 26. Not Christmas Without You
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19th Nov 2020, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Masina Malulu's a character I've been eager to get to for a long time, but other things ended up causing delays in getting there; I think that ultimately works to the character's benefit though, in that I do think this is a good introduction to her, kind of talking about how she's again missing the chance to talk to Sareena on seeking her out. I think it fits well with how she's carrying herself here and it gives room to give the info she wants to give some proper breathing room.

Speaking of, there was an implication before that this was something she was trying for -

wrightasrayne.thecomicseries.com/comics/815

God, that art's from just over a year ago, bizarre looking back at that. ... Funny, just earlier I was thinking about that period we experimented with giving Ana thicker glasses. Decided it looked too nerdy, which for her is kind of saying a lot.

Speaking of, while this is largely a simple, basic page, I did try and give it a little personality from what we could see of the room, give Ana a pretty nice-looking bed. I kind of wouldn't mind getting some scenes just around her apartment at some point really, be fun to just have some stuff with her, Sonia, and Daryl hanging out or something.

Not that that's a top concern right now though; there's still plenty more left to come in this chapter, and the next couple after it are going to be pretty packed.

Actually this chapter's length is kind of weird to think about; it actually feels to me like we're nearly done because there's only one more story between this one and when we switch to Alex's plot... but that final one is much longer than the others so we're really not close at all.
20th Nov 2020, 12:49 AM
Adam C.
Heh.... Yeah, it feels like we're way later in this chapter than we are. I think a lot of it is just due to how much has happened to us IRL over the time we've been working on it. Is still a lot of stuff I'm eager to get to.

But yeah, kinda hard to talk on this page, it's a very simple one of just conversation but still a good introduction to Manisa.

Kind of all I got; really scatterbrained. Hope everybody enjoys. ^^

Comments:

20th Nov 2020, 2:27 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.