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Comic 1002 - Claim My Kingdom, Page 3

25th Mar 2021, 11:00 PM in 27. Claim My Kingdom
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25th Mar 2021, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
This is a hard one to comment on, most of my thoughts are on the art, which came out pretty damn nice. In praticular that glass in the first panel. Always struggled with those but just look at that glass. Oh, yeah, that makes me feel good. ^^

Beyond that, really digging just how Hazel looks in the jacket. His build is very broad and heroic-looking, looking great as the protagonist of this chapter. The purple jacket looks great too, really invokes images of Alex, plus it just looks good alongside the blond hair. Just looks like a badass despite being easily the shortest person in those four panels and always having other dudes towering over him.

About all I got, is nice to have a quick note that Xmarlek, while nice to Hazel, still tends to be an asshole toward him.
25th Mar 2021, 11:04 PM
Martin F.
Apologies if you're seeing this on it first going up on Comic Fury, some of the dialogue wound up placed coming from the wrong places, we're fixing it in a moment.

Yeah, this one's kind of a weird one to talk about since it's largely just transitionary. Which actually makes it rather odd since the next page was added in post after the rest of the chapter had been written, though it does work as a pretty clean lead-in to that one anyway so can't imagine it feels too jarring.

So yeah, mostly just Hazel, Mercy, and Dewayne - guy previously seen hanging out with Hazel and Verbren here and first seen during the train robbery, most prominently when Daryl kept him from getting away with the lock. That's what he's talking about here, while shortly before that was when Mercy managed to temporarily incapacitate Daryl. Just kind of some callbacks that might not be immediately obvious so figured should throw up some relevant comments on them. ... Honestly there are a lot of other links I'll need to post as this chapter goes along, I should probably round those up ahead of time later.

Eh. In either case, do hope that everyone enjoys this one. I actually need to work on coloring the next page later, been playing too much Xenoblade the past few dyas.


26th Mar 2021, 1:19 AM
Very interesting.