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Comic 1103 - Moonlight on a Magic Night, Page 29

21st Apr 2022, 11:00 PM in 29. Moonlight on a Magic Night
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21st Apr 2022, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heh. Stressful one to get out, but very nice moment. I like that Ivy doesn't try to pretend what she did or make an excuse. She really strikes me as someone who doesn't have any illusions about who she is, and has zero respect for hypocrites or people who make excuses. At the same time she made sure her kid wouldn't get in trouble and would have an easy out.

Just a great bit to see her call out Sarabeth on locking Jordan up, even not giving a shit about them briefly looking mildly regretful about it. Almost makes me curious what she'd do if she heard what they did to Alex. She's not even intimidated by how much taller Sarabeth is than her. I just dig the "I'm looking up at you but I'm still more badass" feel of this page.

Also find myself wondering what Young's thinking about looking out the window. The fact that Jordan escaped but he's going back in? They were locked up for years, maybe he's just thinking about what happened to her and where she might've gone. Maybe just about what it was like having a night of freedom. Just a random detail I threw in that wasn't in the scripts that stands out looking at the page again.

All I got. Hope you guys like~
21st Apr 2022, 11:08 PM
Martin F.
So... Jordan wasn't being entirely upfront it seems. Kind of hard to comment on that aspect of it since we'll get more on that particular subject on the next page, though do kind of feel like it warrants pointing out Maria's line in the second-to-last panel - that that still doesn't justify it.

Initially the previous page was kind of written in a way where Ivy wasn't being quite as upfront about the fact she was letting Jordan go, which might've made this one where she just directly says as much maybe a bit less impactful by comparison, though did feel like it kind of warranted being direct with it given the situation.

Returning to the subject of Maria, thoughts on how she turned out? Been wanting to try and modify how we do curly hair for awhile and this felt like a good page to play around with it on since on the whole it was kind of a light one, though while I think it looks better than what we were doing there is room for improvement. Kind of done relatively quick though admittedly, plus I just wasn't really in much of a working mood in general while cleaning up and coloring this one.

Not a huge amount of this chapter left to come, but still some substantive ground to cover. We're coming up on chapter 30 and got something special planned so hopefully everyone will enjoy what's still to come in this one and the plans for the next.

Comments:

22nd Apr 2022, 12:10 AM
The hair still needs work, very interesting.