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Comic 1108 - Moonlight on a Magic Night, Page 33

8th May 2022, 11:00 PM in 29. Moonlight on a Magic Night
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Author Notes:

8th May 2022, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heheh.... Yeah, we haven't really seen much of Occam/Ash since he showed up, so this is a good chance to really get a good look at the guy. ^^ Feels good to actually see the back and forth. Martin did a good job of having him come off as likeable just out of the box.

Kinda not much to say about this one, really warm, sedate page, nice thing to work on while working on getting used to the new place.

I kinda love that the cool, suave-looking new hero has a banana-colored car. Actually, one fun thing about this page and the one before is that we finally get a really good look at his Tiger/Dragon tattoos, and I dig just how adorable the former came out.
8th May 2022, 11:09 PM
Martin F.
One more page left to come in this chapter; wanting to say initially I ended it at this point but then the one after was added later. This is the end of this scene at least, kind of just laying some groundwork for things.

Yeah, I did kind of right away want Occam - or Ash as it turns out - be a pretty likable guy, sort of have some dumb fun with him and Alex just kind of getting to know each other. Car was kind of part of that, thought just going for kind of a bright and gaudy color would be a cute little thing to give him a bit more charm out of the gate.

Funny thing, calling him Ash isn't really intended as a Misfile reference? Know I've kind of done that plenty in this comic but it more came out of just liking the name Sebastian and thinking that was the best decent nickname I could get out of it, liked it more than the alternative options. Still certainly conscious of it though.

As for this whole partner offer... Actually not entirely sure when we'll get an answer on that. It'll probably be brought up in the next chapter but I don't know what specifically Adam has planned on that particular subject, might not get full follow-through on it until the one after. Guess makes this a little bit of an awkward hook before the author swap but eh, hope everyone enjoys in either case.

Think the stars on this could look better. They're something that was added pretty last minute to give this a bit more background detail but kind of afraid they just look distracting. Tried something new in regards to doing them but not entirely sure it worked out.

Comments:

8th May 2022, 11:34 PM
Very interesting.