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Comic 1132 - Violet Thoughts, Page 13

31st Jul 2022, 11:00 PM in 30. Violet Thoughts
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31st Jul 2022, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
First off, as a reminder, only one update a month through August. We'll be putting up comics on Wright as Rayne on Mondays while Blue Blood Heroes will update on Wednesdays, but we'll be putting up filler on Friday (and Blues on Wednesday) to explain the situation for Well, that's a wrap on... Whatever just happened here. Funny enough part of this page was kind of born out of a suggestion I made a couple of pages ago. Waaaay back in chapter 1 of Black Princess we had this bit -

theblackprincess.thecomicseries.com/comics/8

Had the idea of the same sequence of transformations happening to Misty again. That didn't wind up panning out so the idea was retooled a bit into having the same sequence of things happening to Sareena, but it wasn't really practical to block a whole scene around so we settled for just doing the squid. Kind of a cute callback in either case. Funny enough initially by the end of this page Sareena was going to be turned into a baby, but I recommended skewing a bit older with her so that she'd be a bit easier to incorporate into the action going forward.

Adam actually asked me if Paxton's joke in the last panel was too far but I figured it was too amusing to cut.
1st Aug 2022, 12:29 AM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, out of all the transformations to call back to we went with the giant squid just because it was the funniest and the baby/child one because it was something we could stick her in for a while. I gotta say, when this fight scene started the idea was always that the then-unnamed-Jane-Doe would win and escape, but didn't think it would get quite as bonkers as it did.

Heh. Yeah, I was dead tired doing this page while shuffling around my job so probably could've been heavier on the eye candy but this was the best I could manage at the time. Offhand I think it could be clearer that Doe is hunched over vomiting in the fourth panel than it is. Ehhh, another reason for the break is just that things have been rather heavy for us lately. Main one is still MG, though. Really eager to get that on its feet.

Heh. Wait, I just realized, are they gonna need to clean that vomit out of Dorothy's carpet?

Comments:

1st Aug 2022, 3:58 AM
How in the blazes are they going to get back to normal.
4th Aug 2022, 3:16 AM
Adam C.
Well presumably Sareena'll be normal again after a good 15-ish years. ^^