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Comic 1185 - Two Kings and a Jester, Page 12

17th Feb 2023, 6:00 AM in 31. Two Kings and a Jester
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17th Feb 2023, 6:00 AM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, in case you didn't see that we're building something up folks. ^_^ Hope you enjoy~

Yeah, naturally we needed to include a few more scenes with Narcisco and Starchild interacting, with some natural gags involving hearing about just what Narcisco thinks of Alex. Kinda honestly wanna see more of these two in the future just for how much fun they are bouncing off each other. Hell, that little line Narcisco has about Alex gushing over Xandy wasn't in the script, I threw that in just because it sounded like something Alex would do.

We were genuinely afraid we'd have to do filler; there's been pretty bad weather where we are the last few days and were scared it would short out before we could get this page finished.
17th Feb 2023, 4:44 PM
Martin F.
Was kind of unsure how the last few panels were going to work out in terms of conveying what was actually going on, though think the dialogue helped make it clear. Hopefully comes off good and ominous.

This is probably about the extent of Militant Gold's involvement in this chapter. Not entirely finished writing it yet but as said before I kind of just needed to establish the group now for upcoming purposes we'll get into, is why the only one who really gets an intro here is Eva since the others will work better doing it later. Kind of hard to talk about specifically but there's a reason they're here now even without it immediately adding up to much.

Does bare drawing attention to the fourth panel, which indicates that this is taking place after chapter 3 of MG; kind of just what worked best narratively though tried to write that bit in a way where it sort of alludes to there being something that goes down there without actually giving anything away. Really looking forward to that chapter so hope everyone enjoys though of course we need to wrap up chapter 2 first.


17th Feb 2023, 7:25 PM
In the first panel shouldn't the word balloon arrow be pointing towards Titus instead of Alex, whoa wonder what's going on now.
17th Feb 2023, 10:06 PM
Adam C.
Heh. Good catch, thanks. ^^ Got it.