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Comic 1212 - Before the Morning Light, Page 2

22nd May 2023, 6:00 AM in 32. Before the Morning Light
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22nd May 2023, 6:00 AM
Adam C.
Heheh.. Yeah, the re-iterating the situation keeps going. It says a lot to how big of a deal Light That Remembers is that we're devoting this amount of time to him. Granted, in this case it's less him and more the locks. We're given a quick reminder just how much these shape the people around them, and that both Alex-As-Dorothy and Lillian have touched one.

Just a really good, mellow few moments, especially love Ropun's gag and Alex's immediate snicker at it.
22nd May 2023, 8:56 AM
Martin F.
This one's pretty straightforward but had fun with it. Getting to more directly go into the fact that Lillian and Alex have both touched a lock at some point and are experiencing odd feelings from that is a pretty nice way to kind of build up the stakes I think, plus just enjoy the bouncing off each other going on here.

Kind of wonder about how the head-shaking turned out? Tried to be kind of flashy, kind of comedic with it but do kind of wonder if it would've maybe been depicted better.


22nd May 2023, 8:38 PM
Looks fine to me, very silly.