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Comic 304 - Quiet, Page 1

27th Oct 2013, 11:00 PM in 10. Quiet
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Author Notes:

27th Oct 2013, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
First off - don't forget the bonus page on Friday!

Second, Rin! As can be seen, he's not doing so well. That will be something of a theme as the chapter goes along, though of course there's going to be more to what goes on with Rin than him sitting around talking to himself and watching anime. Stay tuned for more on that.

Pretty happy with this page, incidentally. It's just Rin and some cameos on posters, but I think it largely looks good and serves as a pretty decent way to start the chapter off. We'll likely be spending the bulk of the early part of the chapter with Rin, so it is probably for the better that we start off with him. We'll be seeing some more with him come Friday.

Also, there's a bit of an unintentional mirror in this page to when we get a scene change, but I'll go into that when we come to it. For now, hope everyone enjoys, and don't forget to come by this weekend!
27th Oct 2013, 11:47 PM
Adam C.
Some loser with long dark hair sitting alone in a house watching anime. Man, this chapter is gonna be depressingly familiar territory.

But yeah, naturally I enjoyed doing the wall-scrolls, especially the touch of him stashing his anime on a hidden, sliding shelf with the switch hidden behind the scroll. If I had a geek cave and his engineering knowledge, I'd do the same.

The one on the self is obviously an Evangelion scroll, being a big fan of the series, the one Rin flips is of Ganta from Deadman Wonderland. If you're wondering why the shelves are empty; it's not just me being lazy. There's a reason.

Trying to pay more attention to different body types and give Rin a good scrawny look to him. How'd I do?


28th Oct 2013, 12:14 AM
Rin certainly looks like a scrawny, nervous recluse, so I'd say you did a very good job Adam and who is he trying to call in the first panel?
29th Oct 2013, 8:52 AM
Martin F.
Thinking several people, just trying to get out to someone. Likely his doctor most of all.