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Comic 387 - Sound Alive, Page 14

1st Mar 2015, 11:00 PM in 12. Sound Alive
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1st Mar 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Crrrrap, I gotta add the mist from the last page onto McShay's face here. Damn, Maritn asked me like a week ago to... Ah, well, one sec...

There we go. ^^ So yeah, really been enjoying this sequence. McShay's evil look and downright meanness is a great way of conveying just how painful it's been thus far on both sides. I was really nervous about the second panel, mostly since this wrestling grip is really hard to draw, but think it came out pretty good. ^^

Not sure what exactly I'll have to say beyond that. Action pages are like that. Either way, very pleased.
1st Mar 2015, 11:10 PM
Martin F.
I have the feeling I'll end up having to type my comments twice, Comic Fury's already lagging up a lot for tonight and usually that doesn't get resolved quickly. I'll copy them to be on the safe side.

Anyway! Yeah, pretty happy with this page, but like Adam, not sure how much I'll have to say about it. Idea on the spiked gauntlet was for it to be a lot more jagged and pierce in multiple places at once just enough to force Alex to break the hold, but Adam went this route with the blood to make it look more painful. Think a good call but wouldn't have made the spike so clean-cut. Eh, no huge deal and McShay probably can make it that precise so why not.

Think that's the most I've got. Oh, we're trying something new with the lines on this page, there is that. Minor thing but think it looks a lot better, makes the lines look less jagged. Main thing causing that has been an issue with MS, we seem to have found a better solution now but still not 100% on it just yet, not done much with it to this point.


1st Mar 2015, 11:17 PM
I don't know what McShay and Patricia were expecting from this fight but I doubt it was this, looking forward to the next page.