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Comic 391 - Sound Alive, Page 18

29th Mar 2015, 11:00 PM in 12. Sound Alive
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Author Notes:

29th Mar 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
I just fixed this page so it was presentable. Originally it had McShay in the fourth panel being ridiculously tall. Like, we could just barely see her knees in-frame.

Do rather like the page though. Think the motion in Alex's horse-kick is actually really nicely displayed. Do kinda wish McShay's hit in the penultimate panel was more painful-looking and hard, though. Ah, well.
29th Mar 2015, 11:18 PM
Martin F.
Bah, need to work more on WaR scripts, not actually very far ahead. I know where everything's going but fallen a bit behind on actually writing it.

Anyway, yeah. McShay still looks pretty huge in the fourth panel honestly, but chalk that up to creative liberties given it was kind of needed to look properly imposing.

For what it's worth, did intend for her to not talk again until the end of the chapter. That got changed at the last minute here just because it seemed like a good place for it and I needed to trim some fat off what all I've had planned for it for a bit.


29th Mar 2015, 11:30 PM
Okay lot going on here wonder what's going to happen next.