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Comic 445 - Shopping Star, Burning Bright- Page 29

29th Nov 2015, 11:00 PM in 13. Shopping Star, Burning Bright
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29th Nov 2015, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Back to the Ballroom-Blitz subplot, now. .... Eh, not much to say here. Was cool seeing Paxton with the hair detailing. If embarrassing since I had forgotten to do his subtle and Martin had to get it.

Speaking of, I like how Paxton continuously has to be held back or pulled off by his team-mates. Since Patriot Initiative were designed by committee at least partially for crowd appeal, could see the thought on him being, "Okay, we need a Wolverine type of character."

Ozais looks good with the hair detailing too. ^^ Compliments his eyes.
30th Nov 2015, 4:54 AM
Martin F.
Not sure how much I've got to say on this one offhand, though do like how it came out. Hair detailing does help a good few of these characters pop a little more, there is that.

Yeah, I dunno, blanking. Probably have more to say on the next page though. I'm guessing it's not that hard to get at least some idea of where things are going from this point.


30th Nov 2015, 2:11 PM
This is not going to end well, looking forward to the next page.