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Comic 673 - Key, Page 19

1st Feb 2018, 11:00 PM in 18. Key
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Author Notes:

1st Feb 2018, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, a look into O'Hara's home life. ^^ Was curious just what her house looked like before Martin reminded me we'd seen her place before.

Not really much to say here, am pretty scatter-brained. Did like this entire chapter being a pretty good way of putting some spotlight on Patricia. It really helped her leave an impact without needing to really grab the spotlight and shine it on her really suddenly. Know that O'Hara has someone like this on her side just makes her look all the more sick and disgusting.

I remember in high school I had to draw a photorealistic picture of my own hand; everyone in the class who did so wound up making their own hands look decrypted and withered up. I guess when you're really drawing every nail and wrinkle and crevice it just looks disgusting. O'Hara's hand in that last panel looks like she could be pouring milk in a cereal commercial by contrast.

Speaking of, been slowly (and awkwardly) trying to improve how hands are drawn. Cut down on that weird glove-like-feeling they have now.
1st Feb 2018, 11:14 PM
Martin F.
Yeah, this is pretty much the most direct we've been in regards to O'Hara's motivations - still leaves some questions but I think it should be starting to become at least a bit clear on what exactly it is she wants.

Is it kind of too much having Patricia directly come out and state the homicidal urges thing? I dunno, was kind of afraid it might come off a little too much like explaining the obvious but I wanted to make it clear that when she lashed out earlier it was because that's what she wanted to do in that moment, not the device driving her into a rage.

Next page is the last in the chapter, hoping everyone's enjoyed the ride on this one. We'll be taking a break at that point before getting into the next chapter, Star Night.


1st Feb 2018, 11:38 PM
O'Hara is a real monster she even looks the part, wonder what's going to happen next.
2nd Feb 2018, 2:38 PM
Uh guys page 19 is gone and page 18 got posted twice.
3rd Feb 2018, 12:09 AM
Adam C.
Aaaand fixed. Nnnnng... Stuff like that is so supremely embarrassing.... -_- All the same, gladja like.