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Comic 7 - Stars on the Water, Page 7

24th Oct 2010, 5:00 PM in Prologue: Stars on the Water
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24th Oct 2010, 5:00 PM
Adam C.
Ughhh.... This is the bottom of the barrel for artwork. After this page, the art starts to improve and curve upward in quality, but I think this is easily the worst page so far.

It's weird, since it includes exclusively the two characters I love to draw the most. But it's just such a nightmare, art-wise. I especially hate how in panels 3 and 4, the sidewalk rises vertically into the air behind Gaspeed like a wall. It makes me wanna cry.

Add into that the way of the two of them fight and move like overweight, retired boxers and you've got a bad, bad page.

Thank God they get better after this. Also, I liked Martin's idea of making Gaspeed's eyes go white and get those little lightning bolts when he uses electricty. That looks cool.
24th Oct 2010, 8:55 PM
Martin F.
Not a lot to say on this one. Like I said, these fight scenes are kind of hard to talk about.

The Gaspeed lightning eyes thing was kind of a last minute "Hey, that'd look cool" bit, but I think it works out well. Gives him something to stand out a bit more.