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Comic 784 - Loving Family, Page 28

21st Feb 2019, 11:00 PM in 21. Loving Family
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Author Notes:

21st Feb 2019, 11:00 PM
Adam C.
Yeaaaah, really dunno what to say about this one, but came out pretty fun. ^^ I kinda wish I'd had Cassidy even more roughed up.

I did like doing Ana's costume once I got the hang of it.... Still really loving this claws.
21st Feb 2019, 11:31 PM
Martin F.
This next bit comes from a bit of trimming the fat on the chapter - intended to actually show Paxton and Cassidy fighting but ultimately I deemed it non-essential and kind of cluttering up the chapter. Either way we'll get more details on what exactly happened with that next page... along with why he isn't there but DeGroot is.

Similarly there was sort of supposed to be more to Sareena and Ana fighting before this point, although that more boils down to the idea that I feel like Sareena doesn't really want to hurt her. If she did she probably could've just won off of shooting water in her face given what a glass jaw Ana's been established to have.

Yeah, all I've really got offhand, kind of just a transition page. Next couple should be a lot easier to talk about. ... And on that note I need to go and edit the scripts in the next day or two, been wanting to go back and add a page at a point coming up very soon.


22nd Feb 2019, 12:03 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.