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Comic 829 - Into the Blue, Page 26

28th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM in 22. Into the Blue
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Author Notes:

28th Jul 2019, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Happy with this one but I really have no clue what to say about it. Admittedly rather distracted playing Fire Emblem at the moment.

I feel like the better way to break this for Grant would've been flying Ivy sideways and ramming her head into the ropes, but I could see where that might read as a bit too underhanded for Grant - was really wanting to emphasize here how he's kind of overly pure to the point of letting it to be a detriment. See also how terrible of a liar he is I suppose.

All I've really got to say but hopefully everyone enjoys. I really need to work on scripts later, not quite down to the wire on them but I am running a tad low.
29th Jul 2019, 1:33 AM
Adam C.
Heheh... Yeah, this page came out pretty good; fight continues to be plenty of fun for me, both in reading the scripts and drawing them.

One touch I like is Ivy's continued change in how she's feeling about the fight. We saw in the last page that once she had Grant submitted she went back to being bored. But now that he's found a way to surprise her she's clearly interested in things again. Hell, she's covering a smile with her hand in the fourth panel even though the punch obviously didn't hurt her that much (she's BARELY not no-selling it). She's still messing around, spitting at his face and slapping him around, but she's clearly invested, at least.

Kinda all I got, fights are fun to do but these haven't left me much to discuss. ^^


29th Jul 2019, 1:37 AM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.