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Comic 900 - In Our Own Native Land, Page 15

2nd Apr 2020, 11:00 PM in 24. In Our Own Native Land
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Author Notes:

2nd Apr 2020, 11:00 PM
Martin F.
Not actually say how much I have to say on this one offhand - think it came out fine but not really the most dynamic of pages in this sequence or anything, and can see some areas where it could probably be improved on both a writing and drawing level.

But eh, still think it's fine on the whole. Doesn't give a gigantic amount to talk about, but I do like that little experiment Adam opted to throw in with the reaction shot cut-ins - that'll actually probably be an extremely useful thing in terms of making the next chapter more visually interesting so it's a good time to play around with that.

All I've really got I think but be sure to swing by Monday for more. The sides are all tied up now, wonder who'll come in for the Patriot Initiative next?
2nd Apr 2020, 11:44 PM
Adam C.
Yeah, this one's pretty easy and fun, but not much to say about it; just Misty and Fulton continuing to go at it until they can't any more... I did have a lot of fun drawing it at least. The commentator-box-bits were fun to add in, and I like the 4th and 5th panels for the one-two motion of the kick.

That said, Martin's right, it could still be tighter. I like the motion of Misty suddenly popping that kick at a funny angle, but it'd have more impact if Fulton were tumbling over from it or shifting to the side more, like this was clearly knocking him off his feet.

Still fun at laest, and been enjoying the tournament sequence. ^^


2nd Apr 2020, 11:49 PM
Very interesting, wonder what's going to happen next.