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Comic 94 - The Black Flame, Page 17

15th Aug 2011, 12:00 AM in 3. The Black Flame
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15th Aug 2011, 12:00 AM
Martin F.
Not much to say on this one, though the first panel would probably work better if John had put in an appearance. Ah well.

I do like how Young comes off in this first real appearance, though. And something about his expression in the third panel is funny.

Hey, he got in all of one hit. I'd say that warrants an appearance on the cover. Or not. Guess it beats chapter five, where one of the people on the cover I haven't decided whether or not they'll actually appear. But then, let's worry about four first - that'll start a week from Friday.
15th Aug 2011, 12:23 AM
Adam C.
Eh, blame John being MIA in this page on my laziness. ^^

I should really try to distinguish more with fighting styles. Martin gave very clear, differing fighting styles in the scripts for Ivy and Black Flame, and I tried to stick to that (Ivy is fond of charging and using her strength, Jordan hops around like a lunatic) but don't think I captured it well enough. Young, for his one blow, I wanted to show more as like a fencer or someone who strikes as hard and elegantly as he can with minimal effort. Just one more thing to focus on, I guess. With Martin's scripts, I think I'll be okay. ^^